Revisions

So I got my edits from Bona Fide Books and I am so tickled.  Just two changes!  Do I rock or what? 

The first is the ever popular “The number of the subject determines the number of the verb” (thanks to Strunk and White’s Elements of Style for a clear and concise way to describe that).  It was a has vs. have thing.

The second is a hyphen being needed in “flip-flop”.  Who knew?  Well, obviously, the editors at Bona Fide.  I wanted to use go gos, which is what we called thongs back in the day, but no one knows what go gos are.  And now thongs are a completely different piece of clothing, so flip-flop it is.

I’m learning so much.

I’m going to re-read what they sent me, just to make sure that it is in fact what I originally sent them.  Hopefully I won’t find any additional changes that I think need to be made.

But really?  Two edits?  I’m in heaven.

Until the next level of heaven comes with a copy of my story in a book in my hands.  Bliss?  Oh yeah.

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